Jan 21, 2008

flight’s canceled
duck‘s feather stuck
on the ice-floe
atšauktas skrydis –
ant ledo lyties plunksna
anties prilipus

15 comments:

PATRICIJA said...

superb :)

qualcosa di bello said...

that is so very funny...great laugh in few words!

floots said...

frozen motion :)
love this
thank you

John McDonald said...

good one
john

Mandy said...

you probably mean
sticks
or
stuck

either way I like it.

Ričardas said...

Thanks to all for a visit, I'm glad you liked it and some of you even smiled - that was the purpose. Thanks Mandy for a remark, it's been fixed.

polona said...

clever!
love it :)

Sandy said...

Poor ducks...what to do on an ice floe? They cannot swim so they have to waddle on the ice.

Very nice, Ricardas.

S

Maithri said...

Beautiful

Ričardas said...

Polona, Maithri, thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
Sandy, don't worry, it's just a feather, the duck lost it for freedom :)

andreochka said...

Nicely done! There's something "frozen" in your haiku... I like it very much.

Tikkis said...

I wonder what you were doing on that ice-floe? (Or perhaps just observed from shore?-)

Ričardas said...

Andrea, at that moment yes but now it has already melted away
Tikkis, I was indeed observing it from the safe distance, too cold to get closer

Bill said...

Nice justaposition.

extraspecialbitter said...

nicely done! I hope you didn't miss your meeting...

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