flight’s canceled duck‘s feather stuck on the ice-floe | atšauktas skrydis – ant ledo lyties plunksna anties prilipus |
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15 comments:
superb :)
that is so very funny...great laugh in few words!
frozen motion :)
love this
thank you
good one
john
you probably mean
sticks
or
stuck
either way I like it.
Thanks to all for a visit, I'm glad you liked it and some of you even smiled - that was the purpose. Thanks Mandy for a remark, it's been fixed.
clever!
love it :)
Poor ducks...what to do on an ice floe? They cannot swim so they have to waddle on the ice.
Very nice, Ricardas.
S
Beautiful
Polona, Maithri, thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
Sandy, don't worry, it's just a feather, the duck lost it for freedom :)
Nicely done! There's something "frozen" in your haiku... I like it very much.
I wonder what you were doing on that ice-floe? (Or perhaps just observed from shore?-)
Andrea, at that moment yes but now it has already melted away
Tikkis, I was indeed observing it from the safe distance, too cold to get closer
Nice justaposition.
nicely done! I hope you didn't miss your meeting...
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