heavy headwind old man deigns to stoop eyes full of tears | priešinis vėjas senolis sunkiai lenkias ašarodamas |
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15 comments:
The weight of life... Increasing...
Aha, is the old man crying tears or is the wind causing his tears? This is just what a haiku is supposed to do...make us wonder...very well done.
I have started a new Sensual Senryu blog that you may enjoy visiting sometimes?
S
words so vivid, i can feel the chill
& i forgot to add that i have passed a writing award onto you...
wordpower
Borut, indeed it does and steps are getting steeper.
Sandy, true it is, the mystery to be resolved by age, by pride, by headwind and many others. And I will certainly visit your new blog.
qualcosa di bello, thanks for visiting but do not forget to have a cup of hot tea to get rid of that chill. And by the way, thanks for the Lion :)
i love the ways this one can take us...
Somehow sounds very familiar ...
- You saw me walking today?
Been there.
How sad and lonely can be. I am sad now. But this is lovely. Why have we lost our humanity?
soft love,
T
like it ricardas
john
Thanks to all for your time and very kind comments.
i'm getting a bit that way myself :)
cheers
This is deeply impactful,
Wings of Peace to you,
Maithri
floots, all we are on the same path, all we are :)
Maithri, I'm glad to see you here and thanks for visiting
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