Jan 26, 2008

heavy headwind
old man deigns to stoop
eyes full of tears
priešinis vėjas
senolis sunkiai lenkias
ašarodamas

16 comments:

Borut said...

The weight of life... Increasing...

Sandy said...

Aha, is the old man crying tears or is the wind causing his tears? This is just what a haiku is supposed to do...make us wonder...very well done.

I have started a new Sensual Senryu blog that you may enjoy visiting sometimes?

S

qualcosa di bello said...

words so vivid, i can feel the chill

qualcosa di bello said...

& i forgot to add that i have passed a writing award onto you...

wordpower

Ričardas said...

Borut, indeed it does and steps are getting steeper.
Sandy, true it is, the mystery to be resolved by age, by pride, by headwind and many others. And I will certainly visit your new blog.
qualcosa di bello, thanks for visiting but do not forget to have a cup of hot tea to get rid of that chill. And by the way, thanks for the Lion :)

polona said...

i love the ways this one can take us...

Tikkis said...

Somehow sounds very familiar ...
- You saw me walking today?

Masago said...

Been there.

Inside our hands, outside our hearts said...

How sad and lonely can be. I am sad now. But this is lovely. Why have we lost our humanity?

soft love,
T

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

lovely

John McDonald said...

like it ricardas
john

Ričardas said...

Thanks to all for your time and very kind comments.

floots said...

i'm getting a bit that way myself :)
cheers

Maithri said...

This is deeply impactful,

Wings of Peace to you,

Maithri

Ričardas said...

floots, all we are on the same path, all we are :)
Maithri, I'm glad to see you here and thanks for visiting

Shaulys said...

Šis nuostabus. Sužadino senus prisiminimus apie vieną vėjuotą miestelį...

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