May 5, 2008

dandelion field –
naked oak tree awaits
a bubble bath
ąžuolas nuogas
kiaulpienių pievoj laukia
burbulų vonios

14 comments:

Mandy said...

awaits/for
is grammatically incorrect

tree awaits/a bubble bath
or
tree waits/for a bubble bath

either of the above would be correct British English useage (can't speak from American useage)

great image though

love
mandy

Ričardas said...

Thanks, Mandy, you saved my life!.. Let's go British :) It's done.

Jurgita said...

Oo, koks netikėtas ir linksmas! Norėtųsi į tokį jacuzzi :)

polona said...

oh, i love this! what a delightful image (we had similar ideas recently)

Masago said...

Love it.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

really good! :)

magiceye said...

love the visual it creates!!

John McDonald said...

weeee!!! terrific
john

PATRICIJA said...

a bubble bath...would be really good now :)

Tikkis said...

That old, honorable oak tree ,,,
- indecent!


;-)

Paul said...

Basho
never studied grammar
yet great poems came forth.

Ryan said...

What beautiful imagery! I really like this one, Ricardas.

Haiku Poems said...

cold spell
even the doves stay
on their nest

melekler korusun final said...

thank you
melekler korusun final izle şenyuva bitmeyen şarkı fatmagülün suçu ne

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