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16 comments:
now why should justify a tear? I wonder...
Well, it seems like things of the world I cry for are not important enough...
a good haiku!
and good that you are back (to the net)!
best wishes,
Angelika
...and think of how the grain of sand feels. :-)
well, as long as you dont make others cry...
Great one Ricardo, this reminded me of a similar happening recently.
swirling winds
carry dirt uptown
from knocked down plants
.
Grains of sand --
far away from their home,
homesick, too?
Ricardas san konnichiwa.
It's a nice haiku.
If it is not sand but rain you might cry longer.
Boy, it’s hard not to cry in such a situation, and even harder, as William Blake, would have it, 'To see a World in a Grain of Sand And a Heaven in a Wild Flower, Hold Infinity in the palm of your hand And Eternity in an hour‘!?:)
somuch weight in these few lines...
this is different - I like it. :)
Good to hear from you. So often we require material justification for the emotional, the imaginative, the spiritual.
nice one...
ego buster!
good one!
nice ku
much love
gillena
cool morning view
the moon shares a faint blush
on a blue backdrop
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