light raindrops in my deep footprints on the muddy path | lietaus lašeliai mano giliuos pėdsakuos dumblinam take |
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Daily haiku and senryu posts in english and lithuanian, useful links to haiku resources
Haiku ir senriu dienoraštis anglų ir lietuvių kalbomis, naudingos haiku nuorodos
32 comments:
This says it all!
Great one, very visual, with texture and sound.
Ricardas returns -
many are glad he is fine
no need to worry
.
Lovely, Ricardas. I join uspace in welcoming you back to the web. Hope all is well.
I wonder where you have rambled,
but now we know it: in a very deep swamp?!
Ricardas san konnichiwa.
It's nice Haiku, I like it.
Perskaičiau ir prisiminiau, kad tą lietingą vakarą nostalgiškai pasiilgau rudens. o pėdsakai pripildyti lietaus.... jie tik parodo, kad neišvengiamai ateis laikas saulei. ;)
light raindrops... lovely.
glad you've 'rained' back
much love
gillena
these day I also have rain in my shoes...
...and I've got an award for you, so you can pick it up on my blog :)
That gave me a nice visualization!
i like it that the expression deep is in the middle of the haiku
deep footsteps, deep thoughts
Nice touch Ricardas,
On my path
no raindrops
autumn leaves
suppressing my footsteps
Very Nice Ricardo. It is nice to have you back.
T
Ricardas, I think you mean "footprints."
very lovely one.
i have missed you...how are you?
I'm happy to have just found your blog Ricardas. (I've been looking for different Haiku blogs.)
Consider me a daily visitor.
we miss you, Ricardas!
I wish I could hear the lithuanian version spoken out loud. Beautiful.
I have not made haiga for a while, but I can see that there are so many haiku being posted on so many blogs, and I am beginning to feel like making haiga again.
Today is Winter solstice.
Day after tomorrow and the Sun will climb just little higher!
Happy Season for you, Ricardas!
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I hope you're OK Ricardas, hang in there. Happy Holidays!
:)
MERRY HOLIDAYS
we all have our special ones
drink responsibly
world economy depends
on massive celebrations
for the holidays
we must get together
- before they are over
ancient feelings
days will get longer again
.
I´m just back from the Baltic Sea, Ricardas. We (my family and I) stayed there for the holidays (Christmas).
It would be wonderful if you would return to your blog, dear Ricardas!
May 2009 bring health, luck and prosperity for you!
Best wishes,
Angelika
New Year always bring us special pleasure.
Let all your greatest wishes come true.
HAPPY NEW YEAR 2009, Patricija
Happy New Year Ricardas where ever you are.
It's been a while since your last post. Your vision is missed. May the birds of inspiration lead your fingers to the keyboard that we may know you are with us.
Ron
Hi,
That's a very good haiku. Very visual and i'm drawn to its images.
Hope to read more of your compositions.
You can check other Haiku's here at http://www.haiku.com
You can add your compositions there too!
haiku singer
if only the birds
could feed us pieces of sky
in return for bread
Velvet black, like coal,
Supper incinerated.
I could burn water.
It presents a sadness and affinity at the same time. Well done.
Hey I love your blog. You (and your readers) should submit some haiku to our blog:
http://fivesevenfive.blogspot.com
Keep writing!
Very beautiful Haiku poems here. Thank you..
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