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21 comments:
i am already introduced to the "same above as below" haikus...but this interests me for the chice of the word "drizzle"
wonderful haiku, Ricardas :)
wishes,
devika
**choice of the word
fishes drizzle, interesting Line 2
much love
gillena
good one
john
I love the image of the fish drizzling...
in that shallow pond
fishes dozing
in the midday sun.
I'm Gillena's echo: An interesting line 2!
Best wishes,
Angelika
# 1
my fishing rod
trying to catch
a cloud
# 2
shoal of small fish --
ripples on the lake's
calm surface
:-)
Nice to read your haiku again here!
well done! (it was nice to come back here. it's been too long. )
Giedrame danguje....
Chi chi chi :)
hi I'm Alberto from Italy, I think that your haiku are brilliant..
I have just began to write my haiku blog.
http://haikuneverdie.blogspot.com/
please, tell me waht you think about my haiku..
bye
Hi, Ricardas! After a long time, it's nice to be here again... I really like your latest haiku... a good one indeed!
andreochka
Really enjoying reading your haikus; if you get a chance drop in on my blog and have a read of my own haikus and tell others you think might like them!
Keep it coming,
J.
deep in the pond
cool water,
fish dozing.
Nice one..
God bless you!
Liked the concept of a cloudless sky representing the water.
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Speachless. great work around.!!
nice blog...will b back soon.
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Nicely done!
Good haiku... keep-up the good work... May I share a Haiku about Maria Callas in https://youtu.be/1OJj3QbXIbE
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